What did you like about it? How does it fit wp#1 assignment prompt? If you were going to revise this to submit for wp#1, what would you change? Why?
I like this article since I'm a mother of two and did breast feed my children. I have several friends who have young children too and they had problems breast feeding their children. I can completely understand why she felt so much pressure to breast feed. It is very hard to do in the beginning and some women just have so many problems getting the child to latch on right. I think that she has meet all the requirements for WP#1. The article is 3-4 pages long, she discusses why she is doing research and writing and gives her perspective on the topic as of right now.
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I agree. I think it was a great proposal and that she meets the requirements for WP#1. Im not a mother so i cant really relate to her story. I hope one day to be a mother though, so i can appreciate her story.
ReplyDeletei've always wanted to give breast feeding a shot. There is an indian tribe in arizona where the men breast feed. I am not indian so I don't think they would show me how to get this started, but I can relate and I agree with what you said as well.
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